I wrote a poem and found out that in the first and last lines of each stanza there was something else. Check it out.
-Forgotten Days
A mist a pulse
A whisper in the back
Ground into you
Alive through you
To say to move
To be anything more than
Nothing is forever
I’m somethings formed together
Each part each cell
Is for nothing then
If not a thought
That starts and stops
That is what I am
A mist a pulse
At thought
You
An end a death
Found in a forgotten day
Every experence changes us
Every lost memory fades to dust
What I am what I was
Equates to shapes of smoke
Never the same
Frame to frame
Doesn’t matter never did
Did I realize this as a kid
To see the world as small as dust
To leave my dreams alone to rust
The first lines make this sentence - A mist, a pulse, to say, to move, each part, each cell that is what I am. An end, a death, what I am, what I was doesn’t matter, never did.
The second lines make this sentence - Alive through you, I am somethings formed together that starts and stops you. Every lost memory fades to dust frame to frame to leave my dreams alone to rust.
I was thinking about how every forgotten memory takes away from what we are, because all we are, it seems, are memory’s of new experiences. And that this earth is nothing more than a spec of dust.
But really I wouldn’t have posted this, mainly because I think it sucks, but the first and last line things made me do it.
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